I hate that I usually use my iPad or iPhone and can't see or share my GG-based list or see others. I would be grateful if, in addition to a link, you - and others - could paste the list in your post along with the link. Look forward to reviewing. Maybe I'll wt to it next week at work when I am in a PC.
EDIT: I was curious and inspired, so I broke out my wife's PC laptop. Good list. My chief comment would be to add clothing carried/worn. That can range from trip to season to choice quite dramatically. I've recently gone to nylon windpants, running shorts, and one long and one short sleeve t-shirt. It's a huge weight savings over my previous convertible pants and button up shirt, with the wind pants and other, heavier items that didn't get used. I still always carry a pair of wool or poly long underwear pants. I usually don't both with a LU top, other than the long merino or poly T I already carry. A big compliment for your list would be the very effective and weight efficient hydration setup you have. Nice work.
EDIT EDIT: You don't have any pack listed currently. What are you using? I'd look at the MLD Exodus, Zpacks Blast 30, or Gossamer Gear Gorilla or, if you mean external framed, the Zpacks Exo at 14 ounces. Great deals to be had from GoLite, you've got your weight down where it really won't matter a whole lot, concern is how long are your trips going to be between resupply and will you need a bear cannister to fit inside?