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Maia
(maia) - MLife

Locale: Rocky Mountains
Cajon Pass on 07/03/2012 20:12:14 MDT Print View

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Cajon Pass

Ken Thompson
(kthompson) - MLife
Re: Cajon Pass on 07/03/2012 21:20:24 MDT Print View

Did it have to be a McDonalds? So nasty. It kind of fits the general feeling of that intersection though. I think a good taco truck could make a killing there.

Love the line about your partner's packing strategy.

James Castleberry
(Winterland76)
"Cajon Pass" on 07/03/2012 22:16:39 MDT Print View

Great writing. I especially enjoyed the flashback to imagining the mother showing berries to her child and then back to present-day McDonald's.

Duncan Cross
(parraglider) - MLife

Locale: Sydney
Cajon Pass on 07/05/2012 03:43:08 MDT Print View

I like your brief references to the beauty of your walk tucked away amongst the main story line.

drowning in spam
(leaftye) - F

Locale: SoCal
Re: Re: Cajon Pass on 07/05/2012 04:32:14 MDT Print View

Air conditioning and water when it's 100°F is part of the attraction to McDonalds.

Clint Hollingsworth
(Wanderclint) - M

Locale: North Central Wa State
Nice insights! on 07/10/2012 11:59:51 MDT Print View

Very well written! THank you.